presto
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# abr/11
Olá, pessoas, sou novo por aqui, tenho curtido ouvir ao talento vocal das pessoas. Vocês são muito bons!
Escrevi uma nova "canção", para desabafo próprio, não sei se ficaria bem cantada, não sou um conhecedor de melodia para assegurar que ela serviria a esse fim, nem tampouco sei se é um poema que se possa musicar devido ao conteúdo. De qualquer forma, disponho abaixo para apreciação. Qualquer comentário é válido e me deixará feliz.
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Leave it feeling
Why do I have to go on with this
Everyday it's like another marathon
I can hardly breathe
And I won't manage
To get this length complete
Is it that I don't share this
Is it that I don't share
With all this road empty ahead
I feel so incomplete
Chorus:
One more day
One more day and I see
That Love is all around
Trying to invade me while I flee
Love is a choice of freedom
Leave it open
Leave it open, dear
Almost getting there when this tear struggles
Almost getting there feeling with no touch
Loving despite the world's prevailing trend
If I should never bend to me persisting
To always love instead
Chorus:
One more day
One more day and I see
That Love is all around
Trying to invade me while I flee
Love is a choice of freedom
Leave it open
Leave it open, dear
Bridge:
Of all the immaculate things that I treasure
You are in the core, to the crux and in the heart
If God's planned something
That might be this
To always consider alternatively
Trends of individualism
Stillness of heart
The sign of the times
I won't bend to this
I can always find love in the way
To get us there at the joyful end
That we so hardly need
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